Kia ora Joseph, I am Preston from Red Hill School. I really like your reading writing and maths goals. Next time you could make your writing bigger some people might not be able to read it. Have you achieved your goals?
Hello Joseph, I am Amelia from Red Hill School. I really like how you want to achieve things.You could change your little I's to capital I's. I love how you wrote your topic words in bold.
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Kia ora Joseph, I am Preston from Red Hill School. I really like your reading writing and maths goals. Next time you could make your writing bigger some people might not be able to read it. Have you achieved your goals?
ReplyDeleteHello Joseph, I am Amelia from Red Hill School. I really like how you want to achieve things.You could change your little I's to capital I's. I love how you wrote your topic words in bold.
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